Because ( my first song )

[Alucard]

this song i wrote was my first attempt it may nto be great but i would love to her your thoughts on it


This world, this place,
I can’t forget my feelings,
This world, this place,
Haunt me to say I want you.

Because of you,
I’m here now,
Thirsting for more and more,
In this past we failed,
And still I feel for you,

Because…..
In this shadowy world of my,
Undying passion,
all I can say is I love you.

Everyday as time passes,
All I can see is you in here,
In my mind,
Sleeping, and dreaming,
All see is here in my mind.

Because…..
In this shadowy world of my,
Undying passion,
all I can say is I love you.


Sitting back and reflecting,
Mistakes and unforgotten memories,
I still your face in the mirror,
Staring back me,
With that face,
That I see everyday,
Here in mind.

Because…..
In this shadowy world of my,
Undying passion,
all I can say is I love you.

Wishing and hoping,
I sit here in the darkness,
Waiting, and praying,
That someday,
You’ll come back to me,
Wallowing in self pity,
Because I let you slip through my hands.

Because…..
In this shadowy world of my,
Undying passion,
all I can say is I love you.

All can say,
That here in here in my mind,
I see you,
Forever, forever,
Still wanting say I’m sorry,
Im sorry,
For the way I was,
But a new leaf has turn,
And ill be here waiting for you.

Because…..
In this shadowy world of my,
Undying passion,
all I can say is I love you.

Because…..
In this shadowy world of my,
Undying passion,
all I can say is I love you. (slower)
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[Arya Svit-kona]

O.O

wow...that's....REEALLY good...I wish I could write songs like that...

[Alucard]

it may not be really good but it came to me when i start humming go figure right.

[Arya Svit-kona]

well, any type of literature (which this is technically, i suppose...) is subject to opinion. and my opinion is 2 thumbs up. ;D

[Alucard]

Well thank you,

haha and it for some reason omly took 30 minutes to right about the same amount of time it takes me to right poems.